Saturday, September 09, 2006

poem: softer than mine

someone left
the gate to heaven open,
I can see the light
like thousands of stars
shining through your eyes.

we’re dancing so close
our souls are touching
for a moment,
like my fingers
caressing the nape of your neck.

your skin is
softer than mine
and I wonder in time
will you soften
me too?

3 comments:

Anonymous said...

Yea! I like this one much better. It's very romantic, like slow dancing.

Anonymous said...

Too sweet! :-)

Anonymous said...

If I could only get my girlfriend to write me stuff like this! You are fabulous. I love your poetry.